Look at this: my mended heart

by Tiny Reader   Dec 1, 2006


Appreciate me now,
For soon I will be gone
I'm only hanging around
To keep you clinging on.

The hurt will be your downfall
The type that you caused me,
No one will respect you
For the love you failed to see.

Feel no pity,
See no pain,
I've moved on
And you're to blame.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Normal is the Watchword

    The final stanza was catchy though I fel the word you took me out of the world you as the poet was trying to create. I was prepared to be mesmerized by the feelings of your words. Simple words but they did have a nice ring to them.

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Another great poem. That I can relate to right now. Keep up the good work:) 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Lovely Bones

    I really like this poem. I feel that U can really relate and many others could, as well. You showed your feelings very well through this, and the rhyming added a really cool effect.
    Good luck with Leeds!!
    God Bless,
    Sarah-Joy

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