by Lovely Bones
I really like this poem. I feel that U can really relate and many others could, as well. You showed your feelings very well through this, and the rhyming added a really cool effect. |
by Brittany C
Another great poem. That I can relate to right now. Keep up the good work:) 5/5 |
The final stanza was catchy though I fel the word you took me out of the world you as the poet was trying to create. I was prepared to be mesmerized by the feelings of your words. Simple words but they did have a nice ring to them. |