Comments : Secrets Veiled Within

  • 17 years ago

    by Matt Dahl

    I love your poem! Thank you for your talent!

  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Wow, another great poem by you,
    again you have done a great job with your words, keep it up
    another 5/5 from me......

    Goran

  • 17 years ago

    by TheRevelation

    Great job it was...GREAT!! lol cant think of anything else so keep it up your poetry is a great read.

  • 17 years ago

    by Tammie

    Wow, that was really really good. I think alot of people would be able to relate to this. It flows well, and uses plenty of emotion. I think my favorite line is:
    Feelings of pleasure slowly gathering dust..

    I'm not quite sure why, it just really stood out to me. Another great write by a great writter. =] 5/5

    Tammie xo

  • 17 years ago

    by Elynnka

    The last stanza was my favourite! Such beautiful descriptions in it. wonderful poem!
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by ashley

    I can really relate to this poem 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    This was beautiful...so sweet yet so sad.
    I loved this, I think you did a wonderful job.