I really like this poem.
It has a strong base.

Aww...that was really sweet. your such a good writer---> i'm jealous, lol, but no i'm serious, you really are good. keep up the good work XD

I LOVE THIS POEM I THINK IT WOULD BE GREAT IF YOU REALLY DID SAY THIS TO YOU SOON TO BE WIFE WHEN YOU ASK HER TO MARRY YOU!

lots of love
lola

I LOVE THIS POEM I THINK IT WOULD BE GREAT IF YOU REALLY DID SAY THIS TO YOU SOON TO BE WIFE WHEN YOU ASK HER TO MARRY YOU!

lots of love
lola

I LOVE THIS POEM I THINK IT WOULD BE GREAT IF YOU REALLY DID SAY THIS TO YOU SOON TO BE WIFE WHEN YOU ASK HER TO MARRY YOU!

lots of love
lola

This poem is reallt sweet and I teared up a bit you poem has touched my emotions. ANd its poem as yourself who give other inspiration

Beautifully penned poem. Excellent job. Thanks for sharing. Good Luck!

Great poem

Wooow!!! this is soooooo sweet!!!!!! i really really loved it! whoever you're talking about in your poem, she's a very lucky girl!!!! did you really ask her to marry you? i know that if someone proposed to me with these words i would have said yes without thinking! :p anyway, keep up the great job cause you really got talent!!!!!!
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I thought this was a good piece. It was full of passion, and the well written rhymes, helped in giving the piece a wonderful flow.

Brad

This is so beautiful. its hard to believe this could be inside the soul of a 19 year old. its kind of sexy!lol. whoever the girl is she is very lucky.

Aww thats wondeful!

Excellent love poem, I've always thought that love poems were the best poems and you reminded me of that.

That was an amazing poem it had a wonderful flow just a great all round poem and each verse had its own topic :)

That was sweet and nice love your poems

That was so so so so so so so so so so so times a million, sweet.

really really nicley written, i like the short stanzas, and how the rhymes are really simple

keep it up
5/5
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Wow wee. i love your poems

Awwwez that was sweet!!

Nice and commit ed love i loved the piece of work.