by Spoken Silence Dec 1, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
An empty hand portraying a hollow heart, |
by fakesmile
Itz deep but easy to understand.. a very well written poem... i love it!!! 5/5 that was excellent! |
I loved it, it has some darkness waved between the lines. You create powerful images in the mind with your stanzas. Good poem. 5/5 |
by Sarah Davis
I really like the stage metaphor you've got going on here. It was a really good idea. :) |
Beautiful! |
by James Nappo
I like this a lot. I like how deep it is. When it's like that, it can be taken so many different ways. Kudos, spoken silence. |