It was very easy to understand, but hard to feel. =[ so overwhelming..If you know what i mean.

Yeah you're right,. how can you be so strong, have you really been through that much?

I love it reminds me of well part of me a piece of the puzzle well thought of.

Makes you really think well written. thanks for the hit.

I like this a lot. I like how deep it is. When it's like that, it can be taken so many different ways. Kudos, spoken silence.

Beautiful!

I thought it was called "The Final Applesauce" at first glance. ^_^ haha.

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I really like the stage metaphor you've got going on here. It was a really good idea. :)

I loved it, it has some darkness waved between the lines. You create powerful images in the mind with your stanzas. Good poem. 5/5

Itz deep but easy to understand.. a very well written poem... i love it!!! 5/5 that was excellent!