by Spoken Silence Dec 1, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
On the shore of lost souls |
by .K.i.T.t.Y.
Wow. i loved how you ventured into a metaphorical world. maybe you could just use all nature to discrbie misery, without actually saying the word misery. you would lead people into some deep thinking. that would be great. but i liked this poem. |
by James Nappo
This is brilliant. It's very, very well written. Keep up the good work! |
by Sara
Oh this must be one of the greatest poem I've ever read.. |
"captivating their ignorance," |