Comments : Her eyes are red,her hearts dead

  • 17 years ago

    by skyfox

    I found this poem very confronting. It tears me up that you have to feel like that and yet I know it is true. Your words made me feel ashamed that anyone has to go through that without help and comfort and a shoulder to cry on and someone to say it will be alright because it will if you don't give in. This is a good poem as it really tells it like it is. Thankyou.

  • 17 years ago

    by Shae

    Wow.. nicely written!! That is EXACTLY how I was when I went to a public school (i never cut though, and im home schooled NOW) but I still am sorry for those that go through that. Everyone will, if its in school, or at a job when your older. I never knew someone could get right to the point of how I felt.

    ~Shae

  • 17 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    This poem is so sad! its made me cry!
    i was this way when i was in high school... i hated it... but now my life is much better... i am in college... this is a very well written poem! keep it up!

    thanks for the comment on my poem! means alot to me

  • 17 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    I can TOTALLY relate except i dont cut. but geez. this was just amazing. im in shock. the detailing was spectacular. keep it up 5/5. btw thnx for the comment

  • 17 years ago

    by geeeeee

    One thing my mother taught me in life is that you are your own worst enemy. I spent two years of my life, hating myself but now ive woken up to reality. Ive realised that ive wasted 2 years of my life and i'm not going to get them back. What keeps me going now is knowing there are always people worse off than myself. Ive met a few people who have been through hell and at the end of the day could still smile more than me. You have to stay strong and always remember that Better Days Are coming. xxBonnie

  • 17 years ago

    by xPerfect Chaosx

    Such great detail, such great emotion, yet it made me cry because it's true, it just shows how mean kids are to one another. You are a great writer
    Much Love,
    ~*Danielle*~

  • 17 years ago

    by xxmichaelxx

    I knew RIGHT away who u were picking on. i could sense and by the way u said it...and i knew u wouldn't kno someone that much...that u kno wat they do in everymove. that poem is fantastic! that's like the best ever read so far! that is pure and deep! i can REALLY relate to that...i used to cut too...but i have some friends too...i'm not that alone...but inside i feel like that...that was really sad.... cheer up! someday everything will go right for you!

    xxleisaxx

  • 17 years ago

    by ŘÅÇĦ♥

    Great poem.Very Sad. All I can say is look for the good in all the bad. Live one day at a time. Try to make new friends. and please please stop cutting. It's a horable addiction.

  • 17 years ago

    by tAsTeSlIkEsKiTtLeZ

    Im back hope that puts a smile on your face
    You were here for me now ill do the same for you. I kno i dont no much about highschool bt i do have 2 older brothers. My family always tells me dont let it get to me there kids (The worst kind of human being) :) Please please dont cut i kno it may be hard to stop but if your gone i wont have anyone to encourage me to write your like a sister i never had even though we dont communicate much i still think of you. And if those kids give you trouble kick them :D i do that And whats this thing about your dad i feel really bad. Try to get back

  • 17 years ago

    by V a n i t y V e i n 6 9

    Sad poem... really really really sad... but it was well written!!! thumbs up for that!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by my name is Llama

    Well i'm glad u had the courage to talk to me. leave me a comment with your email address on it so i can send u an email because it will be alot easier to talk with you vire that.

    i have started to feel that i am slipping back into depression also and have also started cutting again. so if it is any consolation we r sorta goin through the same thing in some respect.

    my mum has a mental health problem as well so i know how hard it is to live with.

    i don't know what i can offer you but i am willing to be there to listen to anything you want to tell me. i can also share any experiences i have had if u want to feel less alone (if u no wot i mean) and i can let you know things that have worked with me or things my counsellors have told me to do. maybe it might help u. it's atleast worth a try.

    have u tryed starting a dairy. often it is a great release of tension and feelings. and u can discover things about urself that u don't no. wot i mean is often u can find what is relli troubling u and that way it is easier to find a way to slove it or atleast make it betta.

    i no this may also seem a bit out there but have u ever thought about admitting youself into a children psych hospital for a week or sumtink. it could give you some time out from ur family and maybe give you some strategies to help you feal with life better. you could also try resbite which is like living sumwhere else for myb 2days a week to give u a break. you would have 2 discuss it with ur doctor/counsellor.

  • 17 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    Wowwwwwwww i want to read this again after i get back from work because i rush through it and want i did read i love but like i said i want to read it slower, thanks 4 ur comment
    i ll get back 2u tonight . time to get
    into sleepwalk mode and go to work
    thats what we all do you know just sleepwalk through our daily sucky lives
    until something walks you up. i'LL WAKE UP ON APRIL 3 WHEN I GO SEE
    MY FAV, BAND <STAIND> IN PHILA. GOD I CAN'T WAIT

    CY

  • 16 years ago

    by she

    Oh,this is simply amazing,i can really relate,youre not alone,and it will get better.5/5