by skyfox
I found this poem very confronting. It tears me up that you have to feel like that and yet I know it is true. Your words made me feel ashamed that anyone has to go through that without help and comfort and a shoulder to cry on and someone to say it will be alright because it will if you don't give in. This is a good poem as it really tells it like it is. Thankyou. |
by Shae
Wow.. nicely written!! That is EXACTLY how I was when I went to a public school (i never cut though, and im home schooled NOW) but I still am sorry for those that go through that. Everyone will, if its in school, or at a job when your older. I never knew someone could get right to the point of how I felt. |
by Robie Lincer
This poem is so sad! its made me cry! |
I can TOTALLY relate except i dont cut. but geez. this was just amazing. im in shock. the detailing was spectacular. keep it up 5/5. btw thnx for the comment |
by geeeeee
One thing my mother taught me in life is that you are your own worst enemy. I spent two years of my life, hating myself but now ive woken up to reality. Ive realised that ive wasted 2 years of my life and i'm not going to get them back. What keeps me going now is knowing there are always people worse off than myself. Ive met a few people who have been through hell and at the end of the day could still smile more than me. You have to stay strong and always remember that Better Days Are coming. xxBonnie |
Such great detail, such great emotion, yet it made me cry because it's true, it just shows how mean kids are to one another. You are a great writer |
by xxmichaelxx
I knew RIGHT away who u were picking on. i could sense and by the way u said it...and i knew u wouldn't kno someone that much...that u kno wat they do in everymove. that poem is fantastic! that's like the best ever read so far! that is pure and deep! i can REALLY relate to that...i used to cut too...but i have some friends too...i'm not that alone...but inside i feel like that...that was really sad.... cheer up! someday everything will go right for you! |
by ŘÅÇĦ♥
Great poem.Very Sad. All I can say is look for the good in all the bad. Live one day at a time. Try to make new friends. and please please stop cutting. It's a horable addiction. |
Im back hope that puts a smile on your face |
Sad poem... really really really sad... but it was well written!!! thumbs up for that!!! |
Well i'm glad u had the courage to talk to me. leave me a comment with your email address on it so i can send u an email because it will be alot easier to talk with you vire that. |
by CY GINDLE
Wowwwwwwww i want to read this again after i get back from work because i rush through it and want i did read i love but like i said i want to read it slower, thanks 4 ur comment |
by she
Oh,this is simply amazing,i can really relate,youre not alone,and it will get better.5/5 |