Straight from an alcholic

by ashley   Dec 1, 2006


I take another drink and slip from reality it feels great
dont try to save me i dont want to be its way too late

this is the only way out to forget all the pain over the years
i screamed for you peoples help but noone listens or hears

soon i begin to get addicted to this drink
slowly in a numbing darkness i begin to sink

i dont care about this so god he abandoned me so screw his conviction
my pain is consuming everything i know the one and only thing that loves me is this addiction

this is the greatest choice i ever made
i love it when i feel my self begin to fade

this drink accepts me for who i am its a great feeling
this is the best medicine for healing

deep down I\'m scared hurt and confused
after the rape and beating and even emotionally abused

still deep down i want someone to help me when i get so low i crawl
but thats something i dont have at all

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  • 18 years ago

    by w!th0utyou

    Wow that was really good i like it , its very very very unbelievably good!! keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by steve

    I thought you said it was downvoted lol it rhymed great and the meaning was pulled off perfectly, i love how you through the whole thing you dont care about nothing but the drink but in the end you know you need someones help 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Cathy

    This poem is really sad but your a very good writer you know how to put the words to fit the title perfectly. Another 5/5.

  • 18 years ago

    by UnToLd TrUtH

    This is so sad, I know my words may not help you but I truelly am sorry if this happened to you or is still happening to you. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Shae

    =( i dont know what to even say. that fits my father so much it isnt funny.

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