hi Hayley, I loved the poem, It really makes people think about their own parents; about all those times in a heated, teenage argument kids would scream 'I wish you were dead'. Your poem is a great example of having to cope without a parent. Great work Hayley, K

great job, i dont think THIS is ur best, (i think red shoes is) but it is good, i can relate to ur poem, and well u will see if u look at mine called "with out a dad" i know it hurts not to have a dad, i am sorry that u have to go trew what i do i know it hurts, sorry
much love
alix