Better unsaid

by The Angel of Secrets   Dec 1, 2006


Words are spoken, and yes they hurt,
Thoughts are put into sound.
Rumors are main court, and I am dessert,
A new scar is found.

I could talk back, but I just don't dare,
you make me too afraid.
Maybe it could take me out of my despair,
or maybe I'd just fade.

Words hurt, you should not talk,
the thoughts that go trough your head.
Keep it to yourself, and just walk,
some words are better unsaid.

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  • 18 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    Good point. Sometimes we want to say things, but they are better left unsaid in the end. Good job!
    Charisma*

  • 18 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    I really like this. The last stanza was definitely the best, but I also really liked the way you stylized your two other stanzas. I don't know if this was on purpose, but I liked how lines 1 & 3 were long, and 2 & 4 were short.

    Very good work.

  • 18 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Great poem. I can relate to it and it can be very true. :) 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Tammie

    I like this poem heaps hun. It says alot in a short poem, and it's all so true. The last line fits perfectly and makes a powerful and good ending. Keep it up. =] 5/5

    Tammie xo

  • 18 years ago

    by Fredy

    Wow the last line was just WOW nice poem

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