Wow the last line was just WOW nice poem

I like this poem heaps hun. It says alot in a short poem, and it's all so true. The last line fits perfectly and makes a powerful and good ending. Keep it up. =] 5/5

Tammie xo

Great poem. I can relate to it and it can be very true. :) 5/5

I really like this. The last stanza was definitely the best, but I also really liked the way you stylized your two other stanzas. I don't know if this was on purpose, but I liked how lines 1 & 3 were long, and 2 & 4 were short.

Very good work.

Good point. Sometimes we want to say things, but they are better left unsaid in the end. Good job!
Charisma*