Comments : One last sway

  • 17 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    Nicely done!
    Keep up the wonderful work.
    I'm looking forword to look at more of your poems.
    God Bless 5/5

    ~*tay*~

  • 17 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Wow, filled with emotion. I loved the wording in this poem. You really have a way with words. Great Job! Nice rhymes, keep it up.

    Peace, Joe