Too Fat

by TRAGiC BEAUTY   Dec 1, 2006


You see someone happy
But, I'm big and that's that
I know I'm not perfect
I know I'm too fat

I'm gaining each day
And I have to shed it
It will soon take over
If I allow it and let it

I guess it's too bad
That I'm not that skinny
I guess it's too bad
That I'm not that pretty

I am fat and it kills me
It kills me to see myself
It kills me to know that
I'm big and it's bad for my health

That's what's happening inside my mind
But really, it is not true
It is all happening
Because I'm trying to please you....

--No, this is not true but....it's how a lot of girls feel and I think it was a good topic to write about--rate and comment please!

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  • 16 years ago

    by Lacey Rose

    I know how it feels because i'm one of the "fat girls" that people look at and say "she's big"..it hurts..but it's soo hard not to care what people say..=*[

  • 17 years ago

    by hannah

    SO TURE. 5/5
    i love it, great job C:

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    True. A lot of people would be able to relate to this.. It's so sad thought, the things we do to make ourselves perfect..
    Wonderful poem with a deep message..
    Well done
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by sweetiepie18

    Excellent job!

  • 17 years ago

    by nobody truly knows me

    Wow...i konw so many people who feel this way...even myself occasionally...well...honestly...slightly more than ocassionally(*smiles sheepishly*) great job on this poem...5/5.