The little pieces of my heart

by Anonymous Angel   Dec 1, 2006


This isn't fair,
how can you do this,
didn't you know?
I have feelings too.

you took my heart for granted,
where my love was implanted,
and you just threw it away,
the very next day.

you took my heart,
and tore it apart,
all the little pieces of love
at least what was left thereof,

I thought you were,
my future,
that you were the one,
I was looking for..

now who will be there for me,
to pick up the little pieces from my heart,
who can help me to see,
were I want to be.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Teria

    "didn't you know?
    I have feelings too." < question mark should go after too.
    "were I " < where.

    I liked this poem, actually. It's easily related to, and is formed well. maybe work on the punctuation and capitlization to make it more professional looking. But, it was quite good. :d
    4/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Krysten

    I really liked this poem. it its so full of emotion, an dwas wrritten from the haert. witgh yer permission id like to give my recent-es this poem. msay i plese

  • 17 years ago

    by azii

    I rly like this one! GREAT job! U really express ur feelings fantasticly! Keep up the good work :)

    And btw: Thanks for ur comment! :)

  • 17 years ago

    by sugarfacex

    Aww stephanie i like this poem its one of your bsts well done 5/5 xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by brianna

    I like this poem...i have felt this way before too

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