Comments : The little pieces of my heart

  • 17 years ago

    by tinna

    Well done another great poem by u..
    where u get the inspiration and tallent i dont know but it's working.. great poem,

  • 17 years ago

    by Rafael Navarro

    Wow it appears that love is your muse, and your drive well done

  • 17 years ago

    by Autuumnbree

    Xcellent poem, very deep and full of emotions. I like how you express your pain and how you make your words effect your readers.

    My favorite part is:

    You took my heart for granted,
    where my love was implanted.

    XP

  • 17 years ago

    by *~.:LoVeLy:.~*

    Great poem. Keep up the good work =]

  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    I think overall this is a very nice poem. But it needs a little work for instance it's not "teared" but "tore" and in these two lines I would suggest

    and you just threw it away,
    right the next day.

    My suggestion:
    and you just threw it away
    the very next day

    These are just suggestions though. Thank you for you nice comment on my poem!
    Charisma*

  • 17 years ago

    by brianna

    I like this poem...i have felt this way before too

  • 17 years ago

    by sugarfacex

    Aww stephanie i like this poem its one of your bsts well done 5/5 xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by azii

    I rly like this one! GREAT job! U really express ur feelings fantasticly! Keep up the good work :)

    And btw: Thanks for ur comment! :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Krysten

    I really liked this poem. it its so full of emotion, an dwas wrritten from the haert. witgh yer permission id like to give my recent-es this poem. msay i plese

  • 17 years ago

    by Teria

    "didn't you know?
    I have feelings too." < question mark should go after too.
    "were I " < where.

    I liked this poem, actually. It's easily related to, and is formed well. maybe work on the punctuation and capitlization to make it more professional looking. But, it was quite good. :d
    4/5