by tinna
Well done another great poem by u.. |
Wow it appears that love is your muse, and your drive well done |
by Autuumnbree
Xcellent poem, very deep and full of emotions. I like how you express your pain and how you make your words effect your readers. |
Great poem. Keep up the good work =] |
by *Charisma*
I think overall this is a very nice poem. But it needs a little work for instance it's not "teared" but "tore" and in these two lines I would suggest |
by brianna
I like this poem...i have felt this way before too |
by sugarfacex
Aww stephanie i like this poem its one of your bsts well done 5/5 xxx |
by azii
I rly like this one! GREAT job! U really express ur feelings fantasticly! Keep up the good work :) |
by Krysten
I really liked this poem. it its so full of emotion, an dwas wrritten from the haert. witgh yer permission id like to give my recent-es this poem. msay i plese |
by Teria
"didn't you know? |