Very good. it has a lot of good description and all. keep it up!

That's some real deep stoff. doesn't J die for the same reason? GR8 job:)

Hun... Romeo doesn't have to die. At least not this Romeo! Trust me. Oh Lord, please help him... just make him see his value... please Lord.

Pretty unique theme indeed, liked reading it all the way

all the best and take care

As always you drew the reader into your poems and allowed them a glimpse of your heart and emotions.
And what a glimpse this one was!
This whole poem had me gripped from start to finish.
It had a wonderful concept and the wording was as always excellent.
5/5
*Gem*

Xcellent poem, I like your style of writing and I definitely will be reading more, again XP