by Tainted Beauty Dec 2, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Right now, I feel your heart beating through your shirt, |
by Dark Kitten
A moment of pure bliss. It's sad that we can not hold onto those blissful few moments in our lives, instead of the pain. Really a good read, though your structure was kind of iffy. I hope everything turns out okay. |
by Jenni
This is a good poem, but compared to the other two that I read, I can see what you are capable of writing and to me this does not meet those same standards. Nonetheless, it is a good poem, 4/5 |
Excellent work! The emotion you conveyed through your words was very impressive. I really enjoyed reading. |
I Cant Write Good Love Poems, But I Love Reading Them Because Of Poets Like You, Who Know How To Put Words Together And Make Every Part Of a Love Poem Relatable And Creative, I Cant Find Any Other Way To Say 5.0 |
by Goran Rahim
This is really nice poem, |