This is really nice poem,
very well written...........
you have showed a great emotion in it that really captured my attention, keep up the great work like always.
a 5/5 from me.

Goran

I Cant Write Good Love Poems, But I Love Reading Them Because Of Poets Like You, Who Know How To Put Words Together And Make Every Part Of a Love Poem Relatable And Creative, I Cant Find Any Other Way To Say 5.0

xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

Excellent work! The emotion you conveyed through your words was very impressive. I really enjoyed reading.

This is a good poem, but compared to the other two that I read, I can see what you are capable of writing and to me this does not meet those same standards. Nonetheless, it is a good poem, 4/5

A moment of pure bliss. It's sad that we can not hold onto those blissful few moments in our lives, instead of the pain. Really a good read, though your structure was kind of iffy. I hope everything turns out okay.