This is really well written... |
by donna
Very sad Hun.. I think a lot of people could relate this to themselves.. |
by Mommy And Me
This was a good poem.. i connected to it in so many ways. |
by Bryan
This is a sad but very good poem ciao, great flow and structure, i give it a 5!!! keep it up!!! |
Awww.. that was so sensible.. your words have reached through me.. reminded me of someone.. |
by kimara4955
Its a great poem but it sounds like you;ve had depression or have you known people in that pain i suffered with it for 9 years and i can tell you that i it wasnt for 1 special person that poem would remind him of me xx |