Awh, that was beautiful. I read this in the contest and thought it was great. I love how you added in all the little bits of detail to describe the place. I felt you could have described the boys thoughts a little better though. I also loved the metaphor of the bird singing and how one day his voice will be heard. Nicely done hun. 5/5

What a beautifully written poem, the rhythmn and flow was very good. Well done 5/5 xx

Wow what a beautifully written peice of poetry. I loved it, the Flow was awesome. Greatly done. Keep up the good work.

Peace, Joe

Woow.... im speechless.....

Oh wow...
This was beautiful.
Filled with so much emotion, and so wonderful to read.
An excellent poem.

This was well written, went well with the senario that i had given you . a great read. and touches the soul. great work

This one was excellent. I loved reading it. *5/5*

Alyson