I really enjoyed reading your poem. I think you have great talent. I wouldn't change a thing!

Wonderful write Taylor, extraordinarily penned, you show definite ability, superb!!! Just continue to work to develop your writing and your style, and to study the craft and you should be fine, great work!!!

Thank you for the poem comment =] It meant a lot to me. And this is a very good read. It might have flowed a little better; but i loved the concept. SOrt of..heartbreakingly beautiful.
Good job. 5/5

This is done extremly well. Discrption is wonderful. Excellent job!

WOW. your writing, sooooo good. Keep up the strong emotion you display in your poems. Your wording is fantastic, and your poems, phenomenal. (typo?)

Wow, this may sound sooooooo corney, but you realy have talent! i love all of your work that i've read so far! keep up the excellent work!