This is the first poem of this type I wrote, so Please Vote and Comment. Thanks in advance.

Hey that was awesome! ur really talented and im really looking 4ward 2 reading sum more of ur work. check out sum of mine if u want:)

Sorry for asking but,
are you single?

hey great poem, you write very well for your age, wow it's a really good poem
jemma xxx

hey i really enjoyed reading this one! i can relate 100% i've gone through it a few times... loved it and the ryhming was Gr8!!! keep up the good work and god bless

michelle

Wow!! This is such a great poem! Great job!! :)

Amy