I really enjoyed reading your poem! Keep up the great work!

Beautifuly sad poem. I loved this one. Never read one like it. Keep up the good work. 5/5

That was very well written. the flow could be patched up in some places, but overall it was a stunning write, and i just got caught up in it all. great job!

I thought this was very good. Maybe a little jumpy here and there - the flow could be better, but overall this is very good. Nice imagery created from your words.