Comments : Longing For Three Unspoken words.

  • 18 years ago

    by Matt Dahl

    I really enjoyed reading your poem, thank you for sharing your talent! Outsanding work!

  • 18 years ago

    by Tom Swart

    Wow I liked this --- nice words and good flow, I think you have found it... Keep up the good works

  • 18 years ago

    by Twisted Heart

    This was such a nice read. A really wonderful job. The words and sentiments flowed with such elegance and made for an easy read.

    Great job on this one.
    Jeannie

  • 18 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    I have to tell you that I really loved this poem. I thought it was really wonderful! It was well worded, with some great imagery like unborn letters. I really liked the line about questions you can't find. It was really an amazing poem, and definitely a new favorite of mine under the Love category. Thanks for entering our contest. This is your 1st comment from me, CharismaticCountryGirl.
    Charisma*

  • 18 years ago

    by XfromwithinX

    Tis very good i like ur ryming as well i wish poeple wud do it more. good job :D

  • 18 years ago

    by Layla.

    Whoa. this poem is truly amazing keep up the good work.

  • 18 years ago

    by Chrissers

    I don't know why you love him...

  • 18 years ago

    by Void

    Wow... I never thought this poem would get so many visits... Apperantly that writers block was the best thing to happen in a long time. Haha. *happy* :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Tiffany

    This was simply reathtaking. I loved this poem because i have been there. I was scared to give my love and I know it hurt that i kept it from him, great poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by Jason

    Don't know what to say. This poem has as much strength and heart behind it as those three words you long to hear. Great job.

  • 18 years ago

    by Princess of snow

    I love how you wrote this poem...it's very sad to me

  • 18 years ago

    by nisha

    This is bomb, i like it

  • 18 years ago

    by Cindy

    Beautifully written piece! Excellent job!

  • 18 years ago

    by Lynzie

    Really great poem it really hit me because like the person in ur poem hiding what hey really feel in my relationship i am that person but im just scared to tell him that i love him iduno its hard to explain and im not gunna fill ur comment up with my problem just wanted to drop in and tell you fantastic job *hugs* lynzie kae