Wow - I loved this!!!! I just voted with an excellant and put you on my favorites list... I'll be reading more.

WOW, what a great poem.I really like short poems that bring a strong message.Beautifully written.

"Yet, as my wounds linger to heal,
Your half of our flower grows."
That is one of the most beautiful things I have ever read. This was amazing. 5/5
TuxB

Lol! i reeally liked this poem it made lots of sense n it kinda was mint! i loved the way u keep repeating 'Remember us;' i liked the first lines the best!

Oh my goshh. This is so cute! i loved it! 5/5 definitely. It rhymes and flows so well and just woww.

Should I even bother commenting? You know what I'm going to say....loved it once again! 5/5

Wow, short but really really good. your wording is really outstanding, it reminds me of some of the great poets and how they write. if i thought of one thing to change, it would be the length. although this was short, i really would have loved to read more into it, get more out of it. maybe next time a more in depth approach would be good. but really, a wonderful poem, and i'm not just saying that, i really have no criticism for this poem, you're a very very talented writer. 5/5

Very nice, 5/5 =)

Wow i really like this poem alot...good job and thanks for the comment...Mandz

I loved this poem =^-^= i understood it...my favorite part was the part that said "yet as my wounds linger to heal
your half of our flower grows" keepit up =^.^=

Like this poem

5/5

5/5 excelent.. by now you probably arnt surprised. =p

liked your unique use of words.

"Remember us; forget- me - not" --as simple as it was, i really liked it. =]

w00t for you.

--linds[[x]]

It seems like a hopeful sad love poem. Warming, gives me that cozy feeling inside.
5/5
~Stephen

This is really good--i liked the way you used forget me not in every line. gave it a nice flow. good job, 5/5

I enjoyed this it seemed so how do i say Romeo and Juliet like romantic -sigh-GOOD JOB!!!!keep them coming i enjoy reading ur poems........especially when i am in computers like now with not much to do!