Strange concept to this girlie, and um.. I couldnt really get the rytheme to the poem =/ however, I really like the last stanza =]

I like it! its very different, and slightly random. i totally love it! awesome and unique, "outstanding" doesnt begin to describe it! and i kinda think the changing rythm is neat.

Very origianal and just plain great I especially love the last stanza it captured my imagination like few things do anymore, and on a side note I really apericate all the comments and I do have a few new poems I'm working on, I'll tell you when I'm done

Wow that was nice, it makes you seem in a confusing situation. 5/5 maybe u can read one of mine