Comments : Don't play with my heart

  • 18 years ago

    by Gem

    "Laying there on my floor
    holding me in your arms
    your fingers running through my hair
    you whisper in my ear
    "i love you and want to be with you forever""

    It started off so happy and i could really relate to the first couple of lines.
    And then the ending was quite bittersweet, you combined the two emotions really well.
    Excellent poem
    5/5
    *Gem*