Desires Unfolding

by TravisInABottle   Dec 2, 2006


Just want to hold you, want to stop the time for ever...
let moments halt,
but breaths hold each halted moment together,
and in that paused wheel of seconds ...
i forget myself,
i forget all,
but remember that i am in your arms clinched, with melting, stumbling beats...
let me be there-burning in the fire of love
dissolving in your touch,

my eyes plunging and
reaching the depths of your eyes ...
a flower'll blush red - and,
in love it'll die on every breath...

just a feel, to feel that passionate beats wait inside ...
want to spend hours apart from me,
somewhere lost with you in paradise,
and want to see our love getting richer ...
we coming close, closer than any boundary can define,
close enough that you become a part of me,
-and no distance can ever creep inside-

tell me again and over again that you love me,
and then let's get lost in one another,
let's fly ahead leaving our bodies behind

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  • 18 years ago

    by Batman

    Travis...it was ahmazing...but i dont think that was inteded for me....

    I love your poems...you do so much better than me...i can tottaly sence jelousy...lol

  • 18 years ago

    by *Isolde*

    Great poem you got there. 5/5 keep it up. Dont worry if people dont think its good becouse its great for your first. I only have 6 poems my self and some people dont like them but it doesnt matter as long as you did your best.=]

  • 18 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Very good poem. Keep up the good work. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Brook

    Woww. Veryy well written. I really loved it! You could feel your emotions and your love just flowing from the lines.

  • 18 years ago

    by Lauren Waszkiewicz

    Amazing.. and this is your first poem?? i wish i'd started out like this.. lol. even without a rs(rhyme scheem) it flowed ecsquisitly(Sp?). i loved the metaphors and just the theme and imagery.
    Great Job

    x3 Lauren

    (A return of the favor,
    would be such a treat
    Cause, boy you got talent.
    And seem pretty neat)

    i did not write that. xD

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