I really enjoyed reading your poem. Outstanding job! Keep up the great work!

I've never written an acrostic, I started to once, but didn't... I'd probably suck at it, but I don't reckon you do. Good stuff, and stuff.

Do you or do you not know how beautiful that poem is? i love it. im gonna take it for a project thats due monday. thanks, love
xxx

This poem is great, keep it up *thumbs up*... but what is a arcostic poem =/

This is a very good acrostic poem joe, great flow and put together very good. 5/5!!! keep it up!!!

I really like it, thats so true

Joe! I loveee your acrostics!! You like writing them dont you?? Cos yeah I dunno. Lol. As much as i love acrostics I could never write a good one. It seems to come easily for you!!
Anyways, great poem! I luffed it!! Keep writing!!! 5/5

Take care,
-Glenduh.

Joe boo this was one of the best poems ive ever read keep the good poems coming

That was a good poem. I liked it. It was very creative and thoughtful. Keep up the execllent work Joe. 5/5 from me my friend.

Oh I loved this poem. Keep up the good work. This is a very good poem:)

Your poems so far are stright forward they jsut are..no detial but thats a unique style sum can master sum can't. great job.

lissa

I have written one of these, but this one is truly original. 'Be all you can be' reminds me of the army, and that's sort of the image I had in my head when reading the poem. I imagined some soldier sitting on the ground in some foriegn country, miles away from home, surrounded by dead bodies of strangers and soldiers he had befriended, thinking about his girl back home...and how beautiful she is. And reality and his fantasy merge---what a beautiful mess. Cool poem ;)