From Night To Day

by Synh   Dec 2, 2006


You were my dawning light
What turned my night to day
You wakened me in the morning
You made the darkness go away

My shadows began to dispel
One by one they left my side
When I had you I was happy
Nothing could bring me to cry

The warmth of you're aura
Was enough to make me smile
I would give my life for you
I'd walk a thousand miles

Then you're light that you had
The one that gave me day
Had started burning out
Slowly it began to fade

You're flame flickers
Steadily it begins to die
The heavens darken
Radiance fades from your eye

Soon I would be watching painfully
As the night sky settled above the trees
I would watch the moon rise once more
And witness you're sun set on me

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  • 17 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Great poem...i really really like it! keep it up!

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    There was so much emotion in this poem, that it really stood out.
    The imagery you used was breathtaking, my favourite part was the last stanza.
    I thought you did a wonderful job on this.

  • 17 years ago

    by mistressxsork

    You put so much emotion in this poem. The flow was very good. And the depth and heart were amazing. You are a great poet, keep it up. Nicely done. 4.7/5

  • 17 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    Very nice poem. You used the wrong kind of 'your/'you're' a couple of times, but somebody already mentioned that before.

    "The warmth of you're aura
    Was enough to make me smile
    I would give my life for you
    I'd walk a thousand miles"

    -- This was my favourite stanza. I just thought it was perfect. Nice work.

  • 17 years ago

    by DarkPoetess

    Beautiful absoulutly awesome...i loved this poem and i cried when i read it cause i relate to it so well... i've loved and lost the best i'll ever the honor to be with...those are the best days of my life

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