Oh this is a beautiful poem. I love it. Please never change it. It is so good already. Keep up the good work. I give you a 5/5.

N.B you're= you are
your= possessive e.g is that your dog?
Easy mistake to make, but it can confuse the poem.
First of all, this read nicely but wasn't outstanding.

You were my dawning light
What turned my night to day
You wakened me in the morning
You made the darkness go away
^ Nice ideas in this stanza, but the repition of 'you' is a bit much.

My shadows began to dispel
One by one they left my side
When I had you I was happy
Nothing could bring me to cry
^ Try using some punctuation to break this up a bit.

The warmth of you're aura
Was enough to make me smile
I would give my life for you
I'd walk a thousand miles
^ My favourite stanza. Cute and effective.

Then you're light that you had
The one that gave me day
Had started burning out
Slowly it began to fade
^Suggestion for the last line: And slowly began to fade.
The it throws it off slightly.

You're flame flickers
Steadily it begins to die
The heavens darken
Radiance fades from your eye
^ This stanza is bottom heavy. The first line is shorter than most, while the last is longer. If you can even this out, it will help.

Soon I would be watching painfully
As the night sky settled above the trees
I would watch the moon rise once more
And witness you're sun set on me
^ Nice ending. It's very final and closes the poem well.

Beautiful absoulutly awesome...i loved this poem and i cried when i read it cause i relate to it so well... i've loved and lost the best i'll ever the honor to be with...those are the best days of my life

Very nice poem. You used the wrong kind of 'your/'you're' a couple of times, but somebody already mentioned that before.

"The warmth of you're aura
Was enough to make me smile
I would give my life for you
I'd walk a thousand miles"

-- This was my favourite stanza. I just thought it was perfect. Nice work.

You put so much emotion in this poem. The flow was very good. And the depth and heart were amazing. You are a great poet, keep it up. Nicely done. 4.7/5

There was so much emotion in this poem, that it really stood out.
The imagery you used was breathtaking, my favourite part was the last stanza.
I thought you did a wonderful job on this.

Great poem...i really really like it! keep it up!