Wow i love it!it is sad yet beautiful! i can relate so much ! when my bf killed himself i felt just like that! your amazing!! =] 5/5

I like this one yes you should write more often

This was excellent, I really enjoyed reading this.
Your use of imagery and wording is always a pleasure to read.
Stay strong!

!!! such a powerful strong ending, that really works well you can just tell why you wrote that last line, its like you have just gave up on living and waiting for death. so sad.

again you have wrote this very well and it flows well.

well done xx