This is so well written. Infact, it's how I feel a lot of the time. But, I try to keep my head held up high, and not let things bother me. Only, that doesn't seem to work sometimes. Take care. -Jessie

This is soo good! It has soo much emotion and the rhyming is flawless throughout the whole poem! Omg, this is perfecto! I love it! Keep it up!
xoxo

Wow this poem was so good! i can relate to it so much. i found a quote the other day "ill just smile and pretend everythings ok" which is the message u were saying in this poem. many people cant express how they are feeling. keep up the great work. - em
p.s. thanx 4 ur comments

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So well written! i can totally relate! keep up the good work. im hear if ever you want to talk!
-Gabby