A beautiful poem, a great write! I loved the repetitiveness of it. Good job Twisted Heart, and lol I constantly go to sign as Jpoet, but slow down and have to type Charisma. LOL
Charisma* lol

Just wanted to leave you a comment to tell you how much I appreciated your last two comments and the constructive criticism which I will work on. One poem I knew didn't have great flow, and the other I just didn't change it, but I will now.
On a more personal note, I don't share my name with people. It's nothing personal, but I don't go to chat rooms or email ppl I meet over the internet. I love this site but those are parts of it I don't partake in. So I hope you understand if I remain anonymous...because it's hard to know who to trust. You know?
But thanks again for all your comments, and LOL those poems were inspired because of your work. lol I just got in this poetic mood and I'd read some of your stuff, and was like, "I'm gonna create something really good." lol So thanks again!
Charisma*