Good job!

GREAT! Glad you keep writing. I love your way of putting things. Been missing you in the forums! 5/5!

"I have walked through the valley of death and found i belong."

that line was AMAZING! i really liked this poem! highest vote in my book!

This one had strong feeling. that can be felt with every-word. keep it up.

Wow. its a great poem. written with such passion. its really good. keep writing.

I love how it builds, you can feel the emotion getting stronger as you go.