Once My Life, Twice My Angel

by Void   Dec 3, 2006


Another moonlit coffee mug
Lay in my hands of doubt
Drinking up your memory,
To water down this drought.

Moving on without you,
Is testing me too much.
Multiple choice is harder,
When letters are left untouched.

I write you all the time you know,
Blowing kisses, unreceived
Constantly wishing your shadow,
Would return home, safe to me.

This house echoes your voice at night
And I hear whispers when I wake,
I find myself still searching for,
The smile I could make.

These hands, they feel as empty
As my lonely soul inside.
And though you're gone, my love for you
Was never born to hide.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Simple Sensation

    I loved this read! I really enjoyed the first opening stanza:

    "Another moonlit coffee mug
    Lay in my hands of doubt
    Drinking up your memory,
    To water down this droubt."

    I thought this stanza had wonderful rhyming, great flow, and i just really liked it. Thought i thought you should of used another word apart from "doubt" again in the third line. But still i really liekd the image, drinking up your memory. Great!
    The rest of the poem was also great, the first ne was just nmy fave stanza, thje poem had a good flow, good rhyming, and was quite sad. Keep up the great work! xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Sorefromreality

    That was an amzing poem hun. i loved the whole ieda and u made it in such great detail.

    love ya lots,
    sore

  • 17 years ago

    by Crimson Moon

    Beautiful poem...I rly enjoyed readind it
    I liked especially this part:
    "These hands, they feel as empty
    As my lonely soul inside.
    And though you're gone, my love for you
    Was never born to hide."

  • 17 years ago

    by terrie

    This brings back lots of memories 4 me things that i dont wana remember till i realised thats in the past and now im looking forward to the future. thanks xx

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