This was great it made me keep reading nd begging 4 more
fantastic

You have some Nice Rhymes
and a excellent flow
Very Sad Story..really deep

as the man in white comes to feed you,
and give you your daily shot.
he pulls out a butcher knife.
he's got you ready or not

I liked this
it was a great way to End a poem
Awesome job
5/5
~MF~