Falling Free

by Chong   Dec 3, 2006


Tears fall from my eyes into the air as the wind whistles in my ears.
My hair flies wild over my face as my tattered clothes flap.
I feel cold and alone.
To my right is a blur of gray textures.
To my left is the clear blue.
I see red blots beyond a blurry vision.
The red disappears into tiny specs as bigger blots fly away.
Just barely
I feel pain.
Not the pain of the knives stabbing my heart
But something new.
The pain was all over.
Not just my heart
But my arms
And legs
And..... everywhere.
I realize something that moment.
I realized that I wasn't breathing.
I waved my arms as hard as I could
And saw more red blots flying away.
The pain of my body poured into my mind.
It hurt so much
But I kept moving my body.
The more I moved
The more my body hurt.
The red blots
I realized
Were blood.
My blood.
Then everything came back to me.
I was in a fight with my beloved.
Joe held a knife.
I pushed him and he lunched at me
Time and time again.
I heard in my ears
My scream of horror
And feel fear in my heart
And tears in my eyes.
Then I hear the wind in my ears again
And see my hair in my face.
I close my eyes to bare away the pain.
Then I remember something from long ago.
Something Joe said to me.
I asked Joe if he'd catch me if I fell.
And he said yes.
But he was the one who pushed me.
So how could he catch me?
I cried harder
Just as the wind stopped howling.
I hear a loud thud
For a second my brain rattled
And my vision faded to darkness.
Then
I hear a voice.
It is kind
And sweet.
I see a warm light
And I struggle to open my eyes.
I see Joe bathed in white light.
He was an angel
And I was too.
The pain in my body was gone
But I didn't care.
I was finally with my lover
Joseph Lynn McCullough forever.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Your words really grab the readers attention. Good job!

  • 17 years ago

    by kiara

    Luved it its really discriptive its long but u kept me interested 5/5