by LuvLyLynn Dec 3, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
I hate what you do to me, I hate how you make me feel this way |
by Oscar
Interesting, i liked it too but i also thought of 10 things i hate about you, |
by Mousie
That was really good... an excellent poem, beautiful poem! great flow, great vocab, it was all wonderful... great job 5/5 |
I really enjoyed reading the whole poem. My favourite part was the last line, good job, well done!!! :)oxoxoxo |
by steve
Very good subject, i hate having friend that are more but that you would lose if you made it more and it failed....great flow and rhyming |
by Goran Rahim
This poem is great, nicely written. 5/5 |