Your Red Outfit

by Goran Rahim   Dec 3, 2006


Since last night,
I can't look away from your picture.
Since last night,
You are showing me a happy future.

Since last night,
I remember your smile.
When your pretty eyes,
Gazed at me for awhile.

Since last night,
My heart got hit.
Seeing your adorable eyes,
With that red outfit.

Since last night,
My eyes drew a portrait of you.
Since last night,
My heart is saying "I Love You"

* I had many complain about just writing sad love poems, so now I am writng this happy one, with the hope everyone like it..........
please treat it good as this is piece of my heart, I am submitting it to all those who really care about me and my poetry..........

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  • 17 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    This is sweet.

  • 17 years ago

    by King of The Elements

    Hey Goran that poem was great i really felt what you were saying and it is happier than some of them but the main piont is that as always you did a good job and i like the way you wrote it.The context of it seemed like you spent all day either thinking or writing about this poem. Good Job no. . .Wonderful Job!

    ~King Drake

  • 17 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Wow very sweet, well u deserve it, u always done a very marvelous job so keep it up and continue wrting poens... i wish u all the best..

    kisses,,,,,
    lig

  • 17 years ago

    by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere

    This is an amazing poem. 5/5 from me! I loved it and keep up the writing.

  • 17 years ago

    by Edward D Zurovec

    Great short poem, expressed from a hit heart. Funny Love how it inspires the Spirit. GO RAN after her. 5

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