Comments : Your Red Outfit

  • You know i had a feeling u would post a poem tonight..so i have been checking it all day.
    I really like this poem in so many ways..because since u said that people should treat it nice because its part of you..it gives those who cares about u, a hope..a hope for u to use ur talent to drive out the true self of you and your hearts desire...every poem exceeding this one has always spoken of your helplessnes, your misery and your lost love whom left you without a reason...and here there is with ur new poem...makes this cold winter night..a shinny beautiful spring day..and a summer night with brilian start gaizing down and sharing your happiness.
    iam very glad to hear this..so glad and thankful
    take care
    and hope to see more poem

  • 17 years ago

    by shela

    Og god, let me write my feelings as fast as i can.
    yesterday u told me u had work so u have not been anywhere.
    but i think in this poem u r writing about the Herendon nite...
    and the only person that i can think of wearing a brown outfit it Sopeda, and if this poem is for her then there is something wrong with u.LOL..
    but unfortunatily I had a blue dress that nite, which im regrating.i should have weared A BROWN OUTFIT.
    just joking but a nice poem my dear Goran.

  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Wow, thank you alot my dear angel Farah............. thank you for being happy for me..........

    Wow, shela...
    this poem has NOTHING TO DO WITH U OR UR BESTFRIEND SOPEDA,lol.
    this poem is not about hernden,
    that party was like a year ago?
    If not at least six months,lol.

    this is a new poem that I wrote like less than an hour ago. so buddy again another wrong guess by you.......

  • 17 years ago

    by shela

    Then i have to know what is going on?
    i will not just let is go like this,lol
    but its all kool

  • 17 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    A nice poem, nice to see some happiness in your poem.
    flowed well, not your best, but it was still great!

  • 17 years ago

    by Bryan

    Well i like it goran, it has a great flow and i can tell you are in love with the girl, i give it a 5!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittany C

    I loved this poem. And I love all of your poems no matter what type of poems they are:) 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Im In Love What Can I Say

    I like this one...ya you are always writing sad poems but this is a happy one and it is good. i care about you and your poems because your one of my favorites. good job 5.5

  • Hey
    can u come on msn plz..
    i emailed u but i don't believe u have recieved it.
    thanks

  • 17 years ago

    by blueknight

    Wow dude your a great poet wow now you can express your self in a happy way and i think you found out something or someone lols jk this was great poem I like the repitition and the flow and the idea of the poem it inspired me to write more keeep it up dude great piece nice try :D

  • 17 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    That was beautiful. I like how easily you seem to express yourself. It's nice to write happy poems, too, isn't it? =P

  • 17 years ago

    by LuvLyLynn

    I like this poem a lot, it's not sad like the other ones you write and that's a change and I like it a lot... :) I like a lot of your poems... Keep writing until you can't write anymore you have a great talent....

  • 17 years ago

    by Edward D Zurovec

    Great short poem, expressed from a hit heart. Funny Love how it inspires the Spirit. GO RAN after her. 5

  • 17 years ago

    by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere

    This is an amazing poem. 5/5 from me! I loved it and keep up the writing.

  • 17 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Wow very sweet, well u deserve it, u always done a very marvelous job so keep it up and continue wrting poens... i wish u all the best..

    kisses,,,,,
    lig

  • 17 years ago

    by King of The Elements

    Hey Goran that poem was great i really felt what you were saying and it is happier than some of them but the main piont is that as always you did a good job and i like the way you wrote it.The context of it seemed like you spent all day either thinking or writing about this poem. Good Job no. . .Wonderful Job!

    ~King Drake

  • 17 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    This is sweet.