You know i had a feeling u would post a poem tonight..so i have been checking it all day. |
by shela
Og god, let me write my feelings as fast as i can. |
by Goran Rahim
Wow, thank you alot my dear angel Farah............. thank you for being happy for me.......... |
by shela
Then i have to know what is going on? |
by Tara Kay
A nice poem, nice to see some happiness in your poem. |
by Bryan
Well i like it goran, it has a great flow and i can tell you are in love with the girl, i give it a 5!!! |
by Brittany C
I loved this poem. And I love all of your poems no matter what type of poems they are:) 5/5 |
I like this one...ya you are always writing sad poems but this is a happy one and it is good. i care about you and your poems because your one of my favorites. good job 5.5 |
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by blueknight
Wow dude your a great poet wow now you can express your self in a happy way and i think you found out something or someone lols jk this was great poem I like the repitition and the flow and the idea of the poem it inspired me to write more keeep it up dude great piece nice try :D |
That was beautiful. I like how easily you seem to express yourself. It's nice to write happy poems, too, isn't it? =P |
by LuvLyLynn
I like this poem a lot, it's not sad like the other ones you write and that's a change and I like it a lot... :) I like a lot of your poems... Keep writing until you can't write anymore you have a great talent.... |
by Edward D Zurovec
Great short poem, expressed from a hit heart. Funny Love how it inspires the Spirit. GO RAN after her. 5 |
This is an amazing poem. 5/5 from me! I loved it and keep up the writing. |
by Sweet lig
Wow very sweet, well u deserve it, u always done a very marvelous job so keep it up and continue wrting poens... i wish u all the best.. |
Hey Goran that poem was great i really felt what you were saying and it is happier than some of them but the main piont is that as always you did a good job and i like the way you wrote it.The context of it seemed like you spent all day either thinking or writing about this poem. Good Job no. . .Wonderful Job! |
by Rachel RTVW
This is sweet. |