Aww.. this is SOO SAD!!! i have tears in my eyes.. and wow.. what a PEREFECT.. no BEYONG PERFECT ending.. so strong and wow.. its just like a BAM! in your face anding.. lol.. spectacular write.. definitly my favorite so far!

:X GASP!!! wow. i really love this poem. idk what to say. the last stanza completed the entire poem!!! it was so good. it seems so like real i mean im not saying its not. idk it just seems like a lot of people can relate. i love it. its so HEARTFELT!! great job!!!!