Realizations of dreams

by Hebe   Dec 3, 2006


I see the sky
I breath the air
I close my eyes ,
and wish I was there
Above the ground
Above the sea
There is a door,
and I have the key
Behind that door
There's where you can find
Realizations of dreams of every kind

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  • 17 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    Great little poem , love the way you expressed this poem and the meaning behind it,wording was great,flow was nice in it, well written poem always a pleasure to read, keep it up , your friend Tracy d 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Solus

    Dreams have a way of turning into nightmares.....

  • 17 years ago

    by Fsams

    To be honest this piece is good and the simplicity in this piece makes it good. Short and sweet wordings. tc

  • 17 years ago

    by Debbie

    Reading this piece enriched me with so much bliss. It, indeed, was rather delightful to read. Seeing as doors are used as a metaphor for opportunity, it gave me an impression of dreams manifested into the dimension of realities.
    Nice work.

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    What a beautiful poem. Great job! Take Care Cindy

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