Loss

by Benny Boi   Dec 3, 2006


Sheets soaked of blood,
My tears of pain,
I lay within a bottomless void,
My soul no longer an eternal flame,

Nothing but misery,
Thoughts of Death,
No longer any feeling,
A bloodied ship wreck,

Cut deeper as they pass,
Each night is the same,
This pain relieves the others,
You are not to blame,

Scars of my past,
Come back to haunt me,
Damnation seems all to last,
Crimson pain will free thee,

Peace is no longer,
Only sadness and hate,
These feelings just get stronger,
You've left it too late...

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  • 17 years ago

    by tryinXtoXholdXmyXheadXup

    You write with such emotion. You show the world exactly how you feel. And your way with words amazes me to no end. Great great job. Nessa

  • 18 years ago

    by Crystal

    Benji.... wow babe... um wot do i say.... i loved the write but i do think we need to have a really good indepth talk about everything nd hunni i mean everything..... but hunni i loved the poem understood it like you wouldnt believe but stay strong babe.... lov ya mwah

  • 18 years ago

    by Cindy

    Benny i really like the way you write. i have enjoyed reading your poems. Hope your heart heals soon. Pain of love hurts the worst.

  • 18 years ago

    by Cindy

    Wow! This is such a attention grabbing poem. Good job!

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