Thanks for the comment. Your poem is very powerful. I think that it is an excellent one.

Hi i love this poem very deep and it reads like it is take from youre heart

THIS IS A BEAUTIFUL POEM KEEP WRITTING IM SO SRRY ABOUT UR LOST JUST TRY TO KEEP UR HEAD UP STAY STRONG

Wow...this is wonderful...i loved reading it...it has so much emotion in it...5/5...

...thanks for the comments...

A brilliant use of words to release you pain... they say what dosent kill you, makes you stronger... i hope this has made you stronger Cin... but once again, very well done

Awwww this is a really good poem...i no how it feels 2 lose some1 u love...i lost my first love last year 2 cancer...im sorry 4 ur loss and wat doesnt kill u makes u stronger...and thanx 4 the comments

Cindy you're so good at writing im just an amatuer at it hehe!!!!!! i love every poem you write!!!!!!!! welp i love ya cindy!!!!
*Shannon*(your neice)

This is very nostalgic and quite touching.Oh, if only we could turn back time.I have felt similiar many times.You express this well with such emotion, one can't help but feel it.

Peace, Poetry & Power,

Gary jurechka

Very good. very touching it was like you made the words come alive

Such a moving poem... Very touching indeed.
Your writing is always so frank yet so in depth..
And thats what i call talent..
Well done..
5/5
*Gem*

Very well written 5/5

Very well done. So glad I could put a smile on your face with my poem! It always touches me, when my work reaches the heart or helps another. A lot of my poetry is to inspire, so it's nice to know that it does it's job! thank you for all the nice comments.
Charisma*

Ow my god...i couldn't read this... it only makes me cry over and over again...good job..neatly done.

Ow my god...i couldn't read this... it only makes me cry over and over again...good job..neatly done.

Aw that was so sad a very touching piece once again. very well written xx

Wow Cindy, this poem really touched me... I may only be (almost ) 16, but I can feel your grief and sorrow. Ur on my favorites...

5/5. Again, this had tears to my eyes. I loved it! Again, I hope your doing better, If you ever need someone you can email me!

This was beautifully written...but so very sad.
I'm truly sorry for your pain.
I think you did an excellent job on this.

Thats really sad. its so difficult when you are stuck in one place, thinking of the past and cant see the future. its a very lonely and trapped feeling, one which i know only too well.

keep writing... the future is there... xx