Little Cup of Death

by dollwithafrown   Dec 3, 2006


You said you were suffering in pain
And I blatantly just ignored it
I was upset at your agony
But simply refused to admit

I hated seeing you suffering
That horror in your pleading eyes
So I muted your terror-filled calls at night
And turned up the music to drown the cries

Then one morning I knocked on your door
And you simply didn't open up
So I slowly pushed the door out wide
To find a clear plain plastic cup

Lying on the floor, I presumed it had fallen
So I picked it up and something caught my eye
Five small white pills lying next to your bed
And I realised you had said "goodbye"

I rushed over to your cold body
And aimlessly began to loudly call
Your name in a cloud of unheard pleas
But my words were lost in that box of Tylenol

I cried a hoard of violent sobs
And hugged your body tight
How could I live without you near
When the skies got dark at night?

This is the outcome of ignoring a friend
Who is in trouble and pain right before you
To solve their problems they take a few pills
And leave you broken and torn right through

NOTE: This is not true. I only wrote it for a contest.

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  • 17 years ago

    by disturbed one

    Yes i believe u can overdose on tylenol...but if u cant..u can on tylenol 3's

    but back to the poem...as i was reading this poem the first time...my jaw like..hit the floor...lol it was amazing...and i still find it amazing after reading it like 4 times...u have an absolutely rediculous amount of poem-writing-skill-ness lmao

  • 17 years ago

    by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere

    5/5, Just amazing. And yes it is true, never ignore a friends hurt, even though theyve been hurt, cuz you never know when something is very big that has struck them. Amazing work! keep it up!.

  • 17 years ago

    by mistressxsork

    Can you really overdose in Tylenol? Lol.. anyway.. That was pretty good for a contest.

    The emotion was very good as was the depth. The flow, not so much. Otherwise.. good work.

  • 17 years ago

    by BrokenREALiTy

    I hated seeing you suffering
    I think it would work better as 'I hated to see you suffering' ? Just a suggestion . And:

    realised = realized

    ANYWAYS . Another beautifully written poem from you . This happened to my best friend, so I could imaginee it . There was emotion and I`m glad it isn`t true .
    ..__MiNDYY

  • 17 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    AWwwwww. That's soo sad.
    That would be really bad if it did happend though. Wonderful write!
    God Bless 5/5
    Thank you for the comments.

    ~tay

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