Ohh wow! this is an amazing poem! i loved it. everything about it. i especially loved how you wrote it and the wording of it. amazing!

x3Tiffie

Wow, Im so sorry. I loved this poem but I am sorry you went thorught this.

Excellent written. I loved the last four lines. They really got to me.

The Angel of Secrets

Great poem. Keep up the good work. 5/5 :)

I enjoyed this, particularly the wording and imagery.
I found it very moving and it brought tears to my eyes.
Excellently written.

I've read poems on this subject before (suicide), so that's nothing new, but I did like a few of the phrases you used to describe the situation eg "I cried a hoard of violent sobs" was very good.
Thanks for sharing.

Wow! That was so beautiful! It was very moving, you did an amazing job with that. I also wanted to thank you for your support in my contest. It was my first and with your help it was very enjoyable. It was so hard not to place you in that contest...it was so close! Which you prolly don't want to hear from me since I had to power to change that...and I am very sorry it didn't place. But it was so beautiful. Please keep up the amazing work.
~Midnight Sun

AWwwwww. That's soo sad.
That would be really bad if it did happend though. Wonderful write!
God Bless 5/5
Thank you for the comments.

~tay

I hated seeing you suffering
I think it would work better as 'I hated to see you suffering' ? Just a suggestion . And:

realised = realized

ANYWAYS . Another beautifully written poem from you . This happened to my best friend, so I could imaginee it . There was emotion and I`m glad it isn`t true .
..__MiNDYY

Can you really overdose in Tylenol? Lol.. anyway.. That was pretty good for a contest.

The emotion was very good as was the depth. The flow, not so much. Otherwise.. good work.

5/5, Just amazing. And yes it is true, never ignore a friends hurt, even though theyve been hurt, cuz you never know when something is very big that has struck them. Amazing work! keep it up!.

Yes i believe u can overdose on tylenol...but if u cant..u can on tylenol 3's

but back to the poem...as i was reading this poem the first time...my jaw like..hit the floor...lol it was amazing...and i still find it amazing after reading it like 4 times...u have an absolutely rediculous amount of poem-writing-skill-ness lmao