RUMORS

Hmm...I saw the emotion in it. And I saw the sadness, but I didn't like the flow. I just didn't think it was there. It may have been me, or maybe it it was something else. I'm not 100% sure.

It was beautifully penned with good descriptions, but I think the descriptions could be better. If you tried putting in more adjectives, it may work. I'm not sure.

It's a short poem, so I can't really say much except that I liked most of it. Well done. =) 5/5 xoox

Samantha

I like this poem a lot.. amazing job.. short and simple... but still beautiful and strong.. and so true.. i really like this one

Innocence. I like it very much. It's so short, though. Like i wanted it to keep going. I think it still said all it wanted to, though. So it's amazing. Great job!!

-parker

Wow i can relate to this. i know just what that is like =[. rumors suck and the people who start them suck even more. you did a great job writing this! 5/5

~Kristina