Comments : The pain i feel as i say goodbye

  • 13 years ago

    by Corina

    This is very well written sweetie. It shows your emotions and you've written your feelings very well.

    =) Corina

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    An emotion filled piece.

    Take care and if you need to talk I'm here, EM

  • 8 years ago

    by Marvellous

    Death is never the best option. There's always one out there, who cares.

  • 7 years ago

    by CJ Maleney

    This is so powerful,

    But it conflicts within me. There are things that have happened in life, both mine and many others that should make us be able to say goodbye.

    It's easier said than done though and I'm some instances I haven't because goodbye is so final. Perhaps I should but sometimes I just can't.

    An amazing poem and one to get the cog wheels in ones head turning

    Craig